In the town where I lived there was an abandoned apartment with two-floors. It had broken windows and dirty, crumbling walls, so no locals would ever go near it.
One day me and my friend decided to explore the place. It was still early in the afternoon and there was a lot of light, so we ventured to the second floor.
And there on one of the doors we found some graffiti.
We went closer to have a look and found some words that said: I am in the room ahead.
We decided to go through the door.
We walked until we reached a fork and on the wall it said: I am on the left.
We were getting slightly scared but decided to turn left.
Then we came to the place where there were rooms on both sides of us.
And on the wall it said: My head is on the left and my body is on the right.
My friend, as soon as he saw it, lost nerve and ran away. But I decided to stay and, mustering all my courage, walked through the door on the right. I walked to the farthest wall in the room and on the wall it said: My body is underneath. I looked down and on the floor and it said, "My head is coming here from the room on the left. Don't look behind you."
Quickly I flung myself through the window and ran away.
Since then I have never been near the place.
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2014
In keeping with the current interpretation of the story, I made further alteration to the story.
One day me and my friend decided to explore the place. It was still early in the afternoon and there was a lot of light, so we ventured to the second floor.
And there on one of the doors we found some graffiti.
We went closer to have a look and found some words that said: I am in the room ahead.
We decided to go through the door.
We walked until we reached a fork and on the wall it said: I am on the left.
We were getting slightly scared but decided to turn left.
Then we came to the place where there were rooms on both sides of us.
And on the wall it said: My head is on the left and my body is on the right.
My friend, as soon as he saw it, lost nerve and ran away. But I decided to stay and, mustering all my courage, walked through the door on the right. I walked to the farthest wall in the room and on the wall it said: My body is underneath. I looked down and on the floor and it said, "My head is coming here from the room on the left. Don't look behind you."
Quickly I flung myself through the window and ran away.
Since then I have never been near the place.
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2014
In keeping with the current interpretation of the story, I made further alteration to the story.
Comments
Whoever wrote that graffiti (living or dead) knows how to send a good chill down your spine.
That's an interesting thought about his body being the "body" though~
Unusual story for sure. Thanks once again. =D
The guy had the right idea though--if there's something behind you DON'T LOOK behind you, run forward, haha. People in horror movies always get it wrong.
actually, a lot of these stories have me glancing behind... i have a fear of being crept up on, and a very large, empty bedroom behind me, which creaks periodically.
Good one,Saya.
Scary!
I always enjoy these stories, Miss Saya!
-MsDuck
P.S - I've been following your site since New Year's. I love it! :)
Oh my god. Awesome.
I really like this one. I was scared by the split fork, brrrr <3 Like the others, I'm gonna write this, too XD
anyway, cool Saya! i love the part that he jumps through the window ♥
any ways thanx for such great enjoying stories SAYA!!!!!!!!!!!
Or we could actually be dealing with a ghost here.
I looked down and on the floor and I heard: "My head is coming here from the room on the left. Don't look behind you."
But he said 'heard' instead of read...?