Note: I'm not the author of this story. I've translated it from the original Japanese into English. Please do NOT copy and paste it somewhere else on the web without my permission. Thank you very much for your understanding.
I was the only child in the family and had always been much cherished by both my parents.
My mother especially doted on me and she would never get angry with me even when I made a mistake or did something naughty; instead she would always just smile and forgive me.
Maybe she wasn't an ideal parent but I loved her the way she was.
One day I came home from school and was watching TV in the sitting room when the phone rang.
It was my mother.
'Manami (my name), I'm in the supermarket right now. Can you check if we have carrots in the fridge?'
I said, 'Hang on,' and went into the kitchen.
I was about to open the fridge when something caught my eye. A small notebook lay on top of the fridge.
That's unusual! I thought. I opened the fridge, checked the content, and told my mother about it on the phone.
After I hang up I went to the kitchen again to get the notebook. The notebook was something my mother always carried with her and it looked a bit tattered.
Ever since I was small I had wondered about the notebook.
I thought of my mother who always smiled and forgave me.
But I do remember: every time I made a mistake or did something naughty she quickly wrote something down in the notebook.
And she still continued to do so even now.
For a long time I wanted to know what she wrote inside.
Gripped by curiosity, I opened the notebook without the slightest qualm.
And in the middle of the page which I had opened randomly, I saw these words:
" Today's Manami, -3 points. Only 168 points left."
I was the only child in the family and had always been much cherished by both my parents.
My mother especially doted on me and she would never get angry with me even when I made a mistake or did something naughty; instead she would always just smile and forgive me.
Maybe she wasn't an ideal parent but I loved her the way she was.
One day I came home from school and was watching TV in the sitting room when the phone rang.
It was my mother.
'Manami (my name), I'm in the supermarket right now. Can you check if we have carrots in the fridge?'
I said, 'Hang on,' and went into the kitchen.
I was about to open the fridge when something caught my eye. A small notebook lay on top of the fridge.
That's unusual! I thought. I opened the fridge, checked the content, and told my mother about it on the phone.
After I hang up I went to the kitchen again to get the notebook. The notebook was something my mother always carried with her and it looked a bit tattered.
Ever since I was small I had wondered about the notebook.
I thought of my mother who always smiled and forgave me.
But I do remember: every time I made a mistake or did something naughty she quickly wrote something down in the notebook.
And she still continued to do so even now.
For a long time I wanted to know what she wrote inside.
Gripped by curiosity, I opened the notebook without the slightest qualm.
And in the middle of the page which I had opened randomly, I saw these words:
" Today's Manami, -3 points. Only 168 points left."
Comments
poor girl....
wow thats scary.
i wonder if she can get point or only lose them? i mean if you only lose thats gonna be a hard life.
meaning that the point would only get lesser but not more.
I wonder how many she began with?
What a scary mother!
I think this a warning to single children who are acting bad. hehe!
About the story: oh my gosh. That's really weird! I agree with the posts above. Maybe there's little/nothing points left because she opened the notebook ramdomly. Her mother needs to see a shrink -.-
@HN3: you have a good question, dear! Maybe mother does add points too when the girls is not looking!
@Dethyl: me too!
@ryuu: a good observation, ryuu!
@cerisecherry: you've got a good point there!
@Tani: yeah she should XD
@Princess: I'm glad I'm not the only child in the family! XD
@Diogo: Good man! Always looking on the sunny side of things! :D
@Unicorn: I'm glad you're getting used to it, dear. Hope you and your brother are not too young to be here!
Thank you very much guys for your comments!!:D
I did not found this before read the comments... But it's really scary!!
Sorry I've been busy and I also tend not to reply to the comments in the older posts that don't seem to need my replies! But I do read all your comments dear, and I appreciate them! ;)
I wish I knew the person who wrote this story, but it was posted anonymously and I have no ways of contacting her! But yeah it's worrying!
Whenever I inspect my mother's things, she can quckly find out that I'm the one who did it. I think I'm just too clumsy & I leave a lot of proof when I'm doing it. XD
Anyways, Thank you, Saya~! >w<
My mom is that kind of mother who is very nice and will never scold me or my brother if either one of us ever made mistakes. She is seriously so nice to the point where she will never scold me or anything like that. She has a crazy obsession with notebooks and writes things in them and doesn't let me see what's written inside them. Sometimes, I see positive and happy notes like 'how to make her kids happy' or things like that. But still, I fear for my own life D: Maybe I'm just being paranoid.