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Saturday, 20 September 2008

Thirteen Bodies

Everytime I try to post this story things go wrong, so I'm posting it on the blog's storeroom instead.

CLICK HERE TO READ "THIRTEEN BODIES"

12 comments:

美B said...

This one made me a bit sad, they did a good thing but they all ended up dying? Maybe they went to heaven.

SAYA said...

Don't be sad, 美b!:)
It is strange that they all ended up dying, because they seemed to have done exactly what the old woman told them to do!

Sugar said...

I think the old woman said "give them peace" meaning shuddup abt this and don't say a word to anyone...
Good story though:)

SAYA said...

You may be right, sugar!:D

Mr. A said...

The old woman must have been a bitch in her lifetime. The others didn't deserve to die like that.

Anonymous said...

That ghost is a fucking dick.

Anonymous said...

What a bitch of a ghost. Even if she meant something different from shrine building when she said "give them peace," she could have at least seen that the people were sincere for the dead guys and just gone back and given them more clear instructions than before. But NOO, she has to kill them instead. Fucking bitch.

Catty said...

Please, don't behave like a retarded 16 year old brat and swear.

Anonymous said...

hey, im 16 D:

Winter_Alice said...

i'm 13 :D

Anonymous said...

I think she killed him because she said the 13 bodies there not 14. But they buried her body too, thus 14 instead of 13, so she killed them.

Shu C said...

Ooh, maybe the story itself was haunted as well - and maybe that's why there were some problems posting it to the blog?