At Suma Beach


Suma Beach
(Translated by Saya)

From a 2 chan (Now 5 chan) thread.

797 : : 04/07/14 08:22 ID:Bbq5U+//
Three days ago, yes, it was on Sunday.
I went to Suma Beach*1 with Tokui and Yoshioka.*2

The place isn't too far from home, so we went there by bike, and as we rode past the bus stop by the beach, we saw a group of four punks*3 who had their motorcycles parked by the side of the road.

If you try to avoid such people you will only give them an excuse to pick a fight with you, so we pretended we had no interest in them and tried to walk past them while deliberately chatting to each other loudly about random things like "You know that game we played yesterday..."

798 :2 : 04/07/14 08:26 ID:Bbq5U+//
And then, as we tried to walk past them, the back of my bike accidentally rubbed against one of their custom motorcycles.
"Oops," I thought, but there was a chance that they hadn't noticed it, so I didn't stop and just walked on. But:
"Oi, you there! What do you think you're doing to my motorcycle! What's with you, walking away without saying sorry?" they said, and surrounded us.

"You have some guts, don't you? Not scared of us at all,right ?"
 One punk wrapped his arm around my shoulder.
"Yes, I am scared, I mean you look so strong, I'm scared to death that I was afraid to talk," I said, trying to ingratiate myself with him.

Then suddenly, one of them climbed onto his motorcycle and grabbed Tokui's arm.
"Hey, I'll make your bike faster for you," he said, and kick-started the motorcycle, dragging along Tokui who still sat on his bike. 



800 :3 : 04/07/14 08:31 ID:Bbq5U+//
"Please let go of me, I have nothing to do with this," Tokui begged, but the motorcycle started running really fast like a rocket.

Tokui's bike kept up with the speed but after a while Tokui fell off the bike and smashed his right foot against the curb of the road, breaking all his toes.
"Ahhh! It hurts, it hurts! I wasn't the one who did it, so why? It hurts!" Tokui was crying, but the punk was laughing so hard saying, "Haha! That was funny, just like that movie Back to the Future!"

"Wow, you're like a stunt man, now I want to get a driving license too, can you do such awesome tricks if you ride a motorcycle? Does it feel good to ride a motorcycle?" I said some random weird things, desperately trying to butter them up.
The punk smirked and said, "That bastard is next," and got his hands on Yoshioka.

801 :4 : 04/07/14 08:35 ID:Bbq5U+//
And then I was suddenly kicked in my back and fell flat on my face.
"Now, aren't you getting a little cocky?" The punk said, and he did a Judo move on me while I was still lying flat on the road.
"Ahhh! It hurts!!" I cried as I grabbed a pebble but let it go.
"Let's start the Suma World Cup, shall we? Hehehe," the punk said, and struck my head with a foot.
Yoshioka, meanwhile, was getting his head bashed against a steel pole, over and over again. He was crying but didn't resist.
Tokui was cuddling his foot and didn't move. The punks were laughing like crazy saying, "These guys have no guts!" and continued kicking me.
It was then that a car came and pulled up near us.

802 : 5 : 04/07/14 08:39 ID:Bbq5U+//
A man got out of the car. He was about thirty years-old.
The punks brightened up and greeted the man, "Good evening, Mr.__ ."
"Yeah, yeah, here comes the King of Suma Beach, Mr.___ ," the man declared noisily and when he saw Tokui lying on the road, he kicked him really hard.
"It hurts!! It hurts!!" Tokui screamed at the top of his lungs.
"Hey, boy, what are you doing there lying on the road? Are you sleeping? Is it OK to run you over and kill you?" The man stomped on Tokui.
Tokui twitched all of a sudden, and then became still.
"No way, damn it, this guy is dead!!"  The man turned away and walked back to the car. "You guys are murderers!" He told the punks and drove away in his car.

803 : 6 : 04/07/14 08:41 ID:Bbq5U+//
The punks went over to Tokui and exclaimed, "Shit!" and then they all climbed onto their motorcycles and drove away.
My face hurt like hell and I just lay still. Yoshioka was squatting down in the bush, and Tokui was stock-still.
We stayed that way for about ten minutes.
Suma Beach at Night
805 : 7 : 04/07/14 08:48 ID:Bbq5U+//
We stayed like that for a long time but it was getting dark around us, and I was becoming scared, and so I called, "Hey, Tokui!"
Tokui didn't stir.
Just then I heard something go Bam! from the beach.
Before I had time to work out what it was, I heard a voice that sounded like a sutra chanting that went, "Annnnnnn Myoooooooo Jyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" and a child whose body was green all over came running towards us in the darkness.
I became scared as hell and closed my eyes. I was really scared. I mean a tiny child whose whole body was green came running to us.
Then (I think) the child started screaming really loudly, "Joooooooo Miiiiiiiiiiii Shinnnnnnn," and Yoshioka started crying.
I was too scared and opened my eyes, and then I saw a lot of people under a street lamp on the other side of the road. Their faces were the faces of aliens.

807 :8 : 04/07/14 08:52 ID:Bbq5U+//
The alien-like creatures started screaming "Ahhhhhh, Ahhhhhh, Ahhhhhhhh!!!!" and they all rushed to where Tokui lay. The aliens all started weeping.
I got scared, so I climbed onto my bike and drove away.
Later on, Yoshioka called me on my mobile and we met at a family restaurant*4 in front of the Park Hill.

Next day, we found out Tokui died in the end, but the voice of those aliens when  they yelled "Yuuu Kiiiiiiiii!!!" while they cried was scary.
Tokui's full name is Tokui Yuki, so I was shocked they knew his first name.*5
I still wonder what it was, you know.

810 :8:04/07/14 08:59 ID:Bbq5U+//
So that's my story. Sorry, it must be confusing.

811 :Anonymous:04/07/14 09:03 ID:xbmVeaSl
It's not so much scary as it is tragic

812 :8:04/07/14 09:05 ID:Bbq5U+//
You're right, and I have to go to the police again today after I have my breakfast.

820 :Anonymous:04/07/14 09:51 ID:7EC2uH7s
Hey, 8, you are posting in the wrong thread.
That's just a depressing story.

I didn't expect to read such a disgusting story first thing in the morning.
Even though I know it's fake, it still makes me feel bad.

822 :8:04/07/14 10:09 ID:p2kzAIaA
I'm really sorry about that, but anyway, I was scared.
At night, both the aliens and Tokui are on the beach, especially in the narrow space in the beach huts!!!!!!
I have all windows covered completely by newspapers!!! In my room!!!! Do you understand!!??
Because I can see the beach from my house, I don't feel safe. They might be able to see my room too,
if they see my room lit up, I don't know what may happen, you guys have no idea
Those beach huts, can't they pull them down? The child is in between the walls
Whats the best thing for me to do?

830 :Anonymous:04/07/14 11:34 ID:IJsrLsmS
You better stop ranting and go to his funeral

833 :8:04/07/14 11:53 ID:p2kzAIaA
Funeral....that sounds like too much of a hassle. To tell you the truth
I didn't like Tokui all that much....
I don't know if the police even believes my story or not.
This is just between us, but I might go visit to the beach huts tonight.
Those guys at the sea

835 :8:04/07/14 11:59 ID:p2kzAIaA
Do ya know, the sea water at the shore in the middle of night glows brightly.
Noctilucas, firefly squids, flying fish, whatever they are glow around the shore.
You won't believe it!!!! The whole place is like a starlit sky.
So, it's understandable that aliens come from the sea, although the green child is scary,
if aliens know about Tokui, can't they treat me well too?
My full name is Ho-jo Shin-ichi,  but will they take note of my name? I know this sounds a bit nasty,
what shall we do with Shin-ichi?

841 :Anonymous:04/07/14 12:09 ID:wCEe/8eD
Will you stop your crazy rant, if what you are saying were true, I would have heard it on the news by now.

843 :Suma Citizen:04/07/14 12:12 ID:ZPEHuYok
Uh...This is a famous case that happened in my local area.
The case was about some middle school students getting assaulted by motorcycle punks.
One of the kids is still missing, and if I remember right his name was Ho-jo...

846 :Anonymous:04/07/14 12:14 ID:YyMRI1B8
>>Suma Citizen
I know that case!!! The kids from Suma Middle School!!!

847 :Anonymous:04/07/14 12:16 ID:e0mbRKDU
If this story is true, and the boy is the Ho-jo himself,
What did he witness and where has he gone, and where is he now?

850 :847:04/07/14 12:24 ID:e0mbRKDU
When you re-read the story it becomes even creepier...

He clearly perceives the aliens and green child, and it appears he even has some friendly feelings towards the aliens.
And what is the realistic description in >>835 ?
On the night of Tokui's funeral, why did he go visit the beach huts?

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*1 Suma Beach - A famous beach in Kobe, in the Kansai region. (Taiken Japan)
*2 Tokui (徳井) and Yoshioka (吉岡) are Japanese surnames. In Japan, people often call one another by their surnames, even between close friends.
*3 Punks - Bōsōzoku (暴走族, literally "running-out-of-control (as of a vehicle) tribe") in the original text. It is a Japanese youth subculture associated with customized motorcycles (Wikipedia).
*4 Family restaurant -  The generic term given to popular and ubiquitous eating establishments in Japan that serve relatively simple food at reasonable prices.
*5 As you know, the surname comes before the given name in Japanese, so in this case Tokui is the surname and Yuki is the first name.

Comments

This must be one of the most bizarre stories I have ever read in my entire life.
Anonymous said…
Woah.. the end gave me chills ;;
Also, looking forward to your next posts Saya~ they’re always so interesting!!
ReignTracer said…
This kinda confused me, but it seems the aliens knew toku and might be an alien too.
From neighborhood punk assault to alien abductions. Still a good read thou
Yukari said…
Great read and so intrigueing. In the beginning, Hojo says the encounter with the punks happened three days ago - but the reactions of Suma Citizen and the Anon give the impression that the famous case happened a much longer time ago, so does time run different for Hojo now? Maybe he shifted dimensions, or frequencies, or whatever one wants to call it, during the encounter ... and that is why he is still officially missing even though he is in the immediate vicinity of the beach where it all happened and has apparently repeatedly been to see the police without getting much of a reaction. (I´m reminded of the movie "The Sixth Sense" here.) I´ve read a story the other day where the spirits of dead people come back from the sea, so what Hojo described as "aliens" might have been something like spirits, too, grieving for having to welcome Yuki into their midst before his time. But Hojo himself is neither dead (so the "aliens" can´t see him) nor a regular human being living in our dimension any more ...
CreanJinSung said…
I just read Shin-ichi and now I think the narrator is Detective Conan.

I noticed that at 822 the ID of 8 is different so I was thinking that wasn't Hojo.
Violet said…
"what sha we do with shinichi" that creeped me out so much
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George V said…
Definitely a mystery going on here. I would be curious if there is any factual basis for part of the story where the punks killed Tokui.
Haem said…
Bizarre and a bit confusing haha, I was thinking about the green child and how the autor refers to him like that, a child meaning that it probably had a human form but with green skin meanwhile he refers to the rest as aliens, what if the green child was Tokui's? since it seems that the child was the first one affected by Tokui's death, like those weird stories that some people tell about having kids with aliens lol
Gabriel said…
I'm quite happy to see another story from 2chan like this, had been a while since the last :D!
But yes, this story is so bizarre!! It's also quite sad with how Tokui died and all. I agree with the others, can't help but feel like Tokui was one of "them", with the other creatures grieving over him...

My favorite post has to be the last one OP (?) made. That "what shall we do with shin-ichi" was just so ominous. I mean, it's possible that someone from Suma just decided to spin a tale atop the incident they had over there, but it's really thought-provoking nonetheless!

Thank you very much for translating this one for us too! Take care and stay safe
Shiawase said…
I'm very happy to see you back Saya! I've been an avid reader for years and I'm so glad I visited after a couple of months of being too busy. I was actually worried from 2015 when you last posted but just kept coming back for these wonderful posts. Very glad to hear you're doing well.. I can't express how happy I am that after many years I decided to post a comment. Haha.. We missed you. So glad you're back.

P.S. No one does 2chan like you do. ��
Diogo Valverde said…
I think this would make an ideal X-Files case, haha. The perfect argument for a Japanese version of X-Files is right here in this post. :D
Hello Mobeedah! I'm glad the story gave you chills! Thank you for your comment and see you again! :D <3
Don't worry dear, it's not supposed to make sense LOL. But I very much doubt they are aliens.
Oh thank you for your great theory! Maybe Hojo is in a different dimension and he may even be dead as you say!
I think on 2chan you can sometimes be the same person but have a different ID but you never know! :D


I deliberately typed "Ho-jo" and "Shin-ichi" with hyphens between each syllable.
Do you know why? I think when the "aliens" shouted "Jo Mi Shin" I suspect they were calling out Hojo Shinichi's name. With Jo being Ho-jo's jo, and Shin being Shin-ichi's Shin.
When I realised the similarity between the name and alien's exclamation, I got really creeped out! :D
Oh really? Our friend Gabriel in her comment below found it creepy too.

As for me, I somehow like the part in the story where the narrator says, "To tell you the truth I didn't like Tokui all that much," maybe because he sounds so harsh all of a sudden.
Unfortunately, I couldn't find any news articles on the case! It is supposed to have happened more than ten years ago, and so it's no wonder we can't find any facts relating to it on the internet? I don't know!
Has your ear stopped ringing, my friend? :D

I have heard women getting pregnant by aliens before! But can a human make an alien pregnant? haha So bizarre!
I'm happy you like the story, because I like it too! :D <3
It's so bizarre that I didn't know what to make of it when I first read it!

The part I found particularly creepy was when the narrator describes how Tokui and aliens and the green child are all on the beach and keeping a watch or something on the narrator! :D

Oh and I forgot to say thank you for your comment! I hope you are safe and happy too! :D <3 <3 I'm sending you my love!
I'm happy to see you too! Thank you for all the comments you've been posting for my blog! :D <3

I actually never go to 2chan or 5chan but only visit those websites that summarize 2chan(5chan) threads! :D But that's very sweet of you compliment me! Thank you very much!
Good old X-Files! I like watching it when I was a child, even though at the time I didn't understand any English! XD
George V said…
Make sense that time could either erase or bury it.
Haem said…
Yes, the ringing has finally stoped thanks for asking :)

And actually, I remember that I read a story about a man who was supposedly abducted by aliens so they could experiment with him by making pregnant one of them, so I guess there's a possibility? haha.
Gabriel said…
I'm glad we do seem to have the same taste on stories xD. I totally know what you mean though, this story went places, it escalated in ways I'd never expect :p

Oh yes, that part was quite chilling too, especially with his description of having to keep the windows covered!

And aw thanks again for the kindness and love! Likewise!! Wish you lots of happiness and a great week :D