A Hole in the Fence

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Imaichō, Nara


(Translated and Arranged by Saya)


One hot summer day, I was walking down a street flanked by old houses, when I noticed a hole in the wooden fence of one of the houses. 

Curiosity made me peep through it, and I saw a beautiful woman who was having a bath in a wooden washtub. 
“Wow! Do some people still have a bath in a garden like that, in this day and age?”


Tarai (盥 Wooden Washtub)


A woman having a bath in a washtub 

An old house with a garden 


I nearly drew back in surprise, but stopped when suddenly a terrifying scene unfolded before me. 

A young man had no sooner stormed out of the house than he stabbed the woman’s chest with a knife he was holding! 

I screamed in spite of myself, and the man turned around. 
Our eyes met! Just as I felt my blood run cold, someone tapped on my shoulder. 

“Hey, boy! What are you doing here?” 
It was an old man. When I told him what I had just seen, his eyes widened. 
“A murder, you say? Haha! Impossible! That house behind the fence is my house, and I have lived alone there for many years. If you doubt my words, why don’t you come in and check it out for yourself?” 

The old man amicably allowed me to enter the garden, and just as he had said, there were no dead body of the woman, or the young man or the washtub filled with water. 

“But you know, that’s so strange… An incident that was similar to what you claim to have seen did actually happen in this house, many decades ago. 
An adulterous wife was once knifed to death by a jealous husband. 
If what you’ve told me was true, then you’ve witnessed a murder which happened in the distant past. 
I would be very interested in hearing more about what you saw.” 

It seemed like the old man loved to gossip a lot. 
Smiling good-naturedly, he said: 
“Now I’ll go get you some cold mugi-cha (Note: 麦茶 Barley tea). Come inside and wait there,” and he disappeared into the house. 

Mugi-cha

While waiting, I peeped through the hole again from “the other side” and what appeared before me this time was a scene of me lying in a pool of blood with the old man standing next to me, holding a kitchen knife in his hand. 

What was being shown to me was the “future.” 
I understood everything clearly in a flash of a second, and ran away at full speed from the house. 

The jealous husband was alive and continued to live alone — in the very house where he murdered his wife. 


Comments

Hello, beautiful and amazing people!

I have been sick all day 😭 (I think it’s a flu).
I thank you in advance for worrying about me🤣 After spending my day in bed all day, I’m feeling much better!
I hope you’re all good and happy though!

While I was editing this story, it occurred to me that some of you know may not know an old Japanese house with a garden!
I hope the pictures will help you to imagine what it is like!

Thank you so much as always for visiting my blog and leaving comments!
Much love and see you again next week 😊❤️
Fiorin said…
Hello Saya! This is really interesting story. Seems the narrator has some sort of premonition, and the house resonated well with them, so it showed them the past first for the context, and the future. Very interesting.

I was wondering if the narrator has some sort of experience with other places, too..

Thanks for translating this story as always, Saya. I haven't been able to comment quite often here, but I'm on Twitter a lot and re-reading the stories are always very nice!
George V said…
I passed by a traditional house on my way to Wadabori park from Nishi-Eifuku Station back in 2022. Luckily no witnessing a murder from a hole in the fence for me. Though from what I could see from the outside, the house looked very nice. Contrast that to the worn down, two storied apartment building across the street from it. Neat story.
@Fiorin
Oh! It’s ok! Leaving a comment here can feel like a lot of work and we are all busy 😱
I’m grateful to hear from you ~ 😆

I’m also so glad you found this story interesting!

Thank you so much for commenting 😊💖
@George V
Oh! From your comment I have realised that “a traditional house” would have been a better translation than “an old house”!
But the original text said 古い家 (古い furui meaning old) but 古い implies traditional so I could have used that instead 😆

I think you have been to more places in Japan than me!

It’s a shame that apart from the damage done by WW2, Japanese people’s love of new things prevented them from preserving old architecture and stuff until the dawn of the tourism!

Thank you so much for your comment! 😊🙏🏻
Nintendrugs said…
Hello Saya!💖
I’m actually recovering from a cold myself too! Being able to stay in bed and rest makes so much of a difference! Hope you feel better soon!🫶🏼
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As soon as I knew the man live in the house I was suspicious as hell! I would’ve never gone inside with him, so creepy even if he wasn’t the killer! Have you been inside a house/building where a crime happened?

Thank you so much for your stories! I love them so much
Brina said…
Wow!!! This story is great! Glad the author manage to avoid his death. I wonder why he was able to see the future and the past through the hole in the fence?
@Nintendrugs
Hello! 😊💖
Oh! I’m sorry you have been suffering from cold too😭 please keep warm and take care!
I have recently heard that drinking hot chocolate will keep flu viruses away! You might like to try it! 😆

Fortunately, I have never been inside a house or building that was a crime scene! Have you? I hope you haven’t! That would be scary😱lol

I’m so glad you love these stories! Thank you so much for your comment 😊🙏🏻❤️
@Brina
I’m so glad you like it! 😊🌸
Maybe the ghost of the wife wanted her body to be found and for her husband to get a proper punishment, because it looks like he hasn’t been caught 😱

Thank you so much for your comment ~ 😊💕
Alex said…
Hello, Saya-san, thank you for translating this story for us! This one was really good. Half-way through, you can already get the sense that this man was the stabber and that somehow, the protagonist had seen the past, but guessing the twist doesn't harm the story at all. Instead, it really nicely builds the dread. Will the protagonist catch on too? Or will the old man be able to get away with murder once more? I read on with bated breath, and was very relieved he managed to escape! Hopefully, there can be justice for his poor wife now.
@Alex

Hello, dear! You’re welcome! 😊

I feel like this old man doesn’t regret killing his wife which is messed up 😱

Thank you so much for your comment ~ I appreciate you⭐️
allucinator said…
This is why I don't want to be nosey.
@allucinator
You are a gentleman and won’t just abandon a damsel in distress to her fate? 🤣
But probably you would not have peeped through the hole in the first place! 😆

Thank you so much for your comment!!
Anonymous said…
Wow turns out the old man is a really A-(ss) hole in the fence 🤬
pardon my pun 😅, I simply can't resist.
Cool and creepy story 😁
@Anonymous (29 May 2024 at 16:36)
Haha! Funny🤣
I love funny puns and you’re always welcome to make them! 😆

Thank you so much for your comment ✨
Aeri chan~ said…
Spees run it is, run for your life.
@Aeri chan
What? I don’t understand what you’re saying 🤣
Thank you for your comment anyway ~ ✨
Anonymous said…
I think Aeri chan meant to type "speed" run. Aka the narrator should speed run for his life
@Anonymous (28 June 2024 at 17:30)
Oh! I see! Thank you for the clarification 😆
Steeple said…
so durig the ...i wanna say 80s-90s there was a public panic about "Stranger Danger" about people abducting children, like by luring them into cars (thats where the "there's candy in my van" tasteless jokes came from). i remember PSAs and warnings about not following strangers when I was a kid. of course most child abuse and even abduction happens from people who the kid knows, like relatives... but it was a moral panic and easy to cause mass hysteria about.

which si all to say: its interesting to see stories like this with different cultural backgrounds, because something as simple as an elderly person offering a kid refreshments can be viewed as kind or sinister depending on those messages. at least the kid had the magic fence to help.
@Steeple It always makes me feel so sad to hear about children getting mistreated 😔 That’s an interesting perspective you have on the story and I can see that you study literature and you are good at it! 😄 We read bad people luring children with sweets in fairytales too, so I guess it’s an ancient theme😆